Poetry
Date: 22nd Mar 2019 @ 4:49pm
Year 5 have spent this week learning all about poetry which we linked to our Geography topic - The Alps. The children learnt about a different type of poem each day and they have chosen their favourite to publish on our blog.
Repeating Poem
The Alps are face chilling,
The Alps are bone chilling,
The Alps are sun blinding,
The Alps are softly snowing,
The Alps are wildly exciting,
The Alps are as cold as staying in an ice bath forever,
In the Alps Skiers can go skiing.
By Raphael
Limerick Poem
The snow is softer than a bow which is harder than a crow,
I can see a mountain bigger than a fountain,
I can feel a breeze, in my glowing knees, I think I might freeze in the shimmering trees.
By Iman
Kenning Poem
Snow-growing
Frost-chilling
Rock-stabbing
Sky-Freezing
Ice-toppings
Wind-whooshing
Avalanche-availing
Climber-climbing
By Noor
Haiku Poem
The ice cold snow falls,
On top of the massive Alps
It is shivering cold
By Amy
Limerick Poem
The Alps are very tall,
But from their the towers are small
If this makes you sick
I will improve my limerick
If you take a wrong step you will surely fall
By Harry
Repeating Poem
The Alps are high mountains with wild winds brushing across people faces.
The Alps are as cold as ice.
The Alps are so fun to ski in.
The Alps are so warm in the summer.
By Zoe
Limerick Poem
I can feel the breeze in my knees,
I believe I’m going to freeze,
I’ll jump of a tree,
If I can see,
The snow took over me.
Haiku Poem
The Alps are snowing,
In the Alps you built a snowman,
Then you can go home.
By Max
Limerick Poem
Family of Miss Jones,
Get back to you homes,
The Alps is gonna fall,
It is very tall,
Don’t worry I will bring you ice cream cones.
By Mia
Limerick Poem
Skiing through the trees,
I can feel the breeze,
Quite big to small,
Larger than the hall,
Now I just broke my knees.
By Busby
Kenning Poem
Giant-peak
Rocky-Wall
Opaque-glacier
Thick-snow
Freezing-feet
By Austin
Kenning Poem
Eye-catching-ice
Frosty-frights
Frozen-weather
Icicle -drooping
Glistening-sun
Piercing-peak
By MIlly
Limerick Poem
The mountains are tall
The opposite to small
The freezing cold snow
Made my self-esteem grow
If I was on a mountain I would probably fall.
By Maisy
Limerick Poem
The mountain was wide as a gong,
It was cold enough to freeze my tongue,
The cold made my self-esteem go,
I found something in the snow a little pink bow
I put it on my head It blew away oh no
By Caleb
Repeating poem
The Alps are a mountain range,
That have silky soft snow.
The Alps is a mountain range,
Where people like to ski.
The Alps is a mountain range,
Where I knocked my knee.
The Alps is a mountain range,
I will never forget.
The Alps is a mountain range,
With a windy winter and a sunny summer
By Ishaaq
Limerick Poem
My feet are going to freeze,
I think I might sneeze
The mountains are tall I think I might crawl so I don’t fall
I don’t want to yawn as I don’t want to lose concentration
Till I reach my destination
By Jackson
Limerick Poem
Snowy mountains that look like fountains,
Fluffy clouds that I call shroud,
And if locals look at me as bonkers,
I prove that I am not that.
By Saad
Repeating Poem
The amazing Alps are as cold as ice.
The amazing Alps are as tall as skyscrapers.
The amazing Alps are a snow machine.
The amazing Alps have sliding avalanches.
By Mahd
Repeating Poem
The wicked wild Alps,
are as cold as ice.
The wicked wild Alps,
have soft silky snow that are as white as snowflakes.
The wicked wild Alps,
are as fierce as the wild wind blazing through.
The wicked wild Alps,
are a severe blue ocean that gracefully glide through the paths.
Limerick poem
Right now, I am staring at a cloud,
Which seems to be singing aloud,
I see the mountain,
it looks like a fountain,
The chirping of the birds is so loud.
By Holly
Repetition poem
The Alps is a mountain range and you should know,
The Alps is a mountain range with tonnes of snow,
The Alps is a mountain range where people like to ski,
The Alps is a mountain range where I hurt me knee,
The Alps is a mountain range where the weather can change as quick as a click,
The Alps is a mountain range where the clocks tick whilst youre having fun,
BANG the avalanche is here, lets run!
By Joshy
Haiku poem
The Alps are freezing,
As cold as the arctic ice,
The snow starts to fall.
By Thomas
Repetition poem
The Alps are scary,
The Alps are rocky,
The Alps are towering,
The Alps are as chilly as the arctic,
The Alps have rocks as hearts,
The Alps are awesome.
By Alfie
Repetition poem
In the awesome Alps the silky soft snow soothes my lips,
In the awesome Alps the perishing breeze touchs my skin,
In the awesome Alps blizzard fall as fast as an avalanche,
In the awesome Alps what was once a seabed turned to heart of stone.
By Mahnoor
Repetition poem
The amazing Alps are located in Europe filled with heavy snow,
The amazing Alps have bright stars at night which can sometimes make you glow,
The amazing Alps like to wail out frost, so beware of the avalanche and don’t get lost!
The amazing Alps are as chilly as ice, so if you go there, don’t take it as a surprise.
By Abigail
Repetition poem
The amazing Alps is a cold place,
The amazing Alps has lots of dangerous avalanches,
The amazing Alps are as steep as a cliff,
The amazing Alps have about a thousand tourists visit a year,
The amazing Alps has snow as fluffy as a cloud,
The amazing Alps are known for skiing,
The amazing Alps are as tall as the sky,
The amazing Alps is home to Mount Blanc, the highest mountain,
The amazing Alps is a great destination.
By Rhea
Repetition poem
The Alps are chilly like spikes down my spine,
The Alps are chilly going in to my hot blooded heart,
The Alps are chilly like a breathing ice dragon,
The Alps are chilly as ice cream.
By Ajay
Repetition poem
The Alps are bone chilling,
The Alps are as cold as ice,
The Alps are a popular place,
The Alps are a skiers dream,
But most of all.. they will freeze you all!
By Ronny
Repeating poem
The wild windy Alps are always there,
The wild windy Alps were once a sea bed,
The wild windy Alps have been battered and deformed,
The wild windy Alps have snow as cold as ice,
The wild windy Alps have lots of different mountains,
The wild windy Alps can be the meanest of the mean!
By Eimear
Super similes
The dragon is as fast as a leopard,
The ice is as cold as the snow,
The sun is shining as bright as a diamond.
By Daniel