Feedback, evaluations and working together

Date: 14th May 2018 @ 5:12pm

In English, the children are preparing their flashback stories for their Hot Write. However, the stakes are high for our new Hot Write, as the children will be visiting Moss Park Infant School soon, where the children will meet the Year 2s (future Year 3s) and share their stories with them.

Therefore, we thought it would be important to share our plans with our friends to hear some feedback before writing the story in full. The children had the chance to add in extra details in their plans, to help the Year 2 readers understand everything that happens in the story. It was also nice to get together to hear all the amazing ideas that the children came up with independently.

Watch this space for updates!

Why did you find this exercise helpful to improve your story? What changes did you make? 

In 5L, what 3 things do we say that feedback needs to be? Clue = KSH!

Miss Lee :)